In Ca_EEG2-1's first offline recording after aversive encoding, under reading (a), wake and quiet wake together (all 87 bursts), OxN is below OxA (26.4 against 35.6% inclusive, 8.0 against 17.2% exclusive; 7 against 15 discordant bursts, McNemar p = 0.13). Reading (a) is the one the Methods imply. Their scoring (6 s epochs, two-state Gaussian mixture on EMG) applied to this mouse's log EMG RMS over the 12 h offline period puts 94.1% of quiet-wake frames and 98.5% of wake frames in wake (97.9% of quiet wake when fitted on the first 6 h), and all 87 bursts in wake. Under reading (b), wake alone, OxN exceeds OxA (32.0 against 28.0% of 25 bursts; 8.0 against 4.0%) on 2 against 1 discordant bursts (McNemar p = 1.0). Under the Methods' wake the order holds at thresholds 1.5 (34.9 against 41.1%) and 2.5 (21.7 against 30.0%), and no difference reaches p < 0.05. Outside bursts both are at most 1.02% of 0.5 s windows. The neutral, aversive and overlap ensembles each have more of their cells in bursts than the remaining cells (median differences 0.005 to 0.010, Wilcoxon p = 0.041 to 0.0003). The paper's statistic (t4 = 4.94, P = 0.016, across five mice) cannot be tested. The evidence against the paper is weak; one 10 min recording of 24 for one mouse of five, with ensemble traces z-scored within it, so levels are not comparable with the paper's source data for this mouse over all 24 recordings (10.37% OxN against 8.39% OxA in wake). Counted inclusively, co-participation here (26 to 36%) is 2.5 to 4 times those values; with the third ensemble excluded (8.0 and 17.2%) it is on their scale, with OxN the lower.
How the test differed from the paper’s method
- One high-shock mouse of five, and its first offline recording of 24 (10 min of 4 h).
- The Methods z-score the ensemble traces over all 24 offline recordings concatenated; here only one is deposited, so they are z-scored within it.
- The criterion fixed four readings (quiet wake in or out of wake; co-participation with or without the third ensemble) and would count the claim under any of them. After the first verification the outcome is judged on wake including quiet wake, as the Methods' own EMG scoring puts quiet wake in wake; under wake alone OxN exceeds OxA without a significant difference, which the criterion would have called partially reproduced.
- The EMG feature of the Methods' scoring (log RMS per 6 s epoch) is chosen here, after the data were seen; the Methods do not name one. Without the log the mixture does not separate sleep from wake.
- Bursts are assigned the sleep state of their peak frame, a choice made here.